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Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Don't Give In ... God Wants You to WIN!

I'm so thrilled to tell you about this delightful book - Don't Give In ... God Wants You to Win, that I'm giving away a copy (but you can't have mine!) This book is such an encouragement to us all, and one you must read.


To enter the contest, just leave a comment below, sharing with us how YOU can win in some area of your life this year! I'll draw a name next Friday (June 12th) , so be sure to leave an e-mail address if I don't already have it.

About the Book:

Popular author and conference speaker Thelma Wells inspires readers to fight the good fight of faith and win the raging wars that they battle each day as the enemy tries to steal their joy, kill their hopes and dreams, and destroy their lives. In her personable and enthusiastic style, Wells helps readers understand:

what spiritual warfare is
why they fight
who they are fighting
how to dress for the war
how to win the war
who ultimately is in control of the fight


Don’t Give In—God Wants You to Win! will cause readers to understand that the battles they fight are really not theirs. Those battles belong to the God of “Peace, be still,” who will give them the strategies and courage they need to resist Satan’s tricks.

Wells writes for anyone fighting battles over family, relationships, finances, health, broken dreams, disappointments, and just the dailyness of life that can cause so much distress and hurt. Through instruction from God’s Word and stories of modern–day as well as biblical people, Wells shows how to relinquish those troubles to the only Person who can guarantee winning strategies for life.

About the Author:

From times of singing in a dark closet to the founding of a national women’s mentoring ministry, Thelma Wells' life has been a courageous journey of faith. The name on her birth certificate read simply: Baby Girl Morris. Thelma’s mother was a severely deformed teenager with no husband and no place to go, since her own abusive mother insisted that she take the baby and leave the house. So when the baby was born, her unwed teenage mother found work as a maid cleaning “the big house” while living with her baby daughter in servants’ quarters. Eventually, the baby went to live with her great-grandparents, who called her Thelma Louise Smith and loved her dearly. They took little Thelma to church, where she learned to love the hymns and praise songs.

On those occasions when Thelma was taken to her grandparents’ home, her grandmother abused her, just as she had tormented Thelma’s mother. She was locked in a dark, smelly, insect-infested closet until just before her grandfather came home when her grandmother would bring her out of the closet, clean her up, and act as if all was well. In spite of her deep fear, little Thelma spent her time in the closet singing every hymn and praise song she could remember. She would sing herself to sleep in that closet, and the Lord received this little girl’s innocent praise and rewarded it with an abundant life of joy, protecting her from feelings of anger or bitterness.

Thelma grew up to become a trailblazer for black women, a prominent international speaker and author, and a wife, mother, grandmother, and great-grandmother. As a student at North Texas State University in Denton, Texas (now the University of North Texas), she was a member of the first group of girls to integrate the school’s dormitories. She earned her Bachelor’s degree there and eventually received a Master’s of Ministry from Master’s International School of Divinity in Evansville, Indiana. In 2002 she became the school’s first black female professor.

In 1980 Thelma became the first black woman in the South to organize her own international speaking and consulting corporation. Her natural talent for public speaking and storytelling attracted the attention of the Women of Faith Tour, and in 1996 she became the first black core speaker for the organization. She has authored several books, including God Is Not Through With Me Yet, an inspiring examination of her own life experiences in which she encourages readers to “sing in the closets of their lives.” She serves as the president of The Daughters of Zion Leadership Mentoring Program, an organization she founded in 2000 (another first for a black woman). Through this ministry, “Mama T,” as she is affectionately called, has mentored over 100 spiritual daughters, received an honorary doctorate degree and was ordained into the Christian Ministry on December 16, 2008, from St. Thomas Christian College and Theological Seminary and the Association of Christian Churches in Jacksonville, Florida. She was also was named Extraordinary Woman of the Year 2008 by Mrs. Julie Clinton, Host of the Extraordinary Women Conferences an affiliate of the American Association of Christian Counselors.

Thelma has been married to George Wells, her best friend, supporter, and encourager, for over 45 years. The couple lives in Dallas, Texas, and has three children, eight grandchildren, and two great-grandchildren.



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Writing for Children Series - Part Four

Adding Christian Values to Children’s Stories

Young minds are impressionable and easily absorb new ideas and concepts. As Christian writers, we should aim to add Godly influence to the words we write. That doesn’t mean that every story has to be ‘Christian’ but rather that each tale is based on Christian principles and values.

Be Ignorant of Evil
Romans 16:19 is an excellent verse to bear in mind when choosing subject material for children’s books. I want you to be wise about what is good, and innocent about what is evil.(NIV) There is much deliberation about the suitability of stories containing magic and witchcraft, but for me, this scripture is the deciding factor. When writing, I steer away from anything that is questionable.

Deliberately Weave Values into Your Stories
There needs to be a purpose to a story – a message that is conveyed in a fun package or in a more serious form. If you’re not sure of what values to convey, think of the fruits of the Spirit as listed in Galatians 5:22-23: love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness, gentleness and self-control. Here’s a link to one of my children’s stories that is free-to-share on Faithwriters.com. It tells the story of a little boy who eats too much chocolate - the underlying message is self-control.

Pray for Inspiration
I pray daily that God will inspire and bless every word I write. Some of my children’s stories may reach a handful, others may go out to thousands, but the important thing is that they have potential to touch lives in a positive way. (Don’t forget that parents get to read a lot of children’s stories as well!)

Aim for Excellence
There are many gifted writers in the children’s market and some of them write ungodly stories. If writing for children is your passion, set some goals, aim high and improve your skills in every way possible. You may not see results straight away but God uses people who are willing to make a stand for Him.

Thank God for Lasting Results
Children love to hear a favorite story time and time again and the message can leave a deep impression in their hearts. I loved my childhood books and can still remember the stories, illustrations and covers of most of them. Ask God that the words you write will be a tool to build godly foundations in the lives of the children that read them.

This is the last in the Writing for Children Series, but I’ll be back next week with a new topic. Make a note to come back on Wednesday and have a look.

Debbie Roome works as a freelance writer from her home in New Zealand. Read some of her work at
Suite 101 , Take Root and Write and Faithwriters.



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Monday, June 1, 2009

Win a $25 Gift Card for YOU and a $25 Gift Card for Your Reader!

Fun contest and awesome interview this week - I'm so excited!

First, contest details: Our special guest author this week, Terri Kraus, is giving away two $25 amazon gift cards - one for YOU and one for one of YOUR READERS if you are chosen as winner. Here's how you enter (be sure to leave contact information with your entry):

Blog about this contest (or post a note on Facebook, Shoutlife, MySpace, Twitter or wherever), and about Terri's books - get your readers talking about RESTORATION - in whatever form it takes. (Terri's series is Project Restoration - you'll read more about it in the interview.) Be sure to link back to this interview. Then, come back here and leave a link to your blog post. At the end of the week, we'll draw a winner from everyone leaving a post. If you are chosen the winner, you draw a name from anyone leaving comments on YOUR post - and we'll award both of you a $25 amazon gift card AND an autographed copy of Terri's book!!

We're also giving away one more copy of Terri's book - just answer this question in the comments and you're entered to win.

Choose one word - Renovate, Restore, Renew - and write a paragraph of what this word means to you in your own spiritual walk.

Everyone writing a paragraph will be entered to win an autographed copy of The Renewal.

Sounds like fun, doesn't it?

Now read Kay Shostak's awesome interview with Terri Kraus. Thanks, ladies, for joining us here on Pix-N-Pens!

KS: Which would YOU rather do with your husband – renovate a house or write a book? Terri Kraus has done several of both!

Terri, tell us how you started writing with your husband:

TK: I've co-written 10 books with my husband, both historical and contemporary fiction. Jim works for Tyndale House, and they gave us our start when in 1996 we co-authored the Treasures of the Caribbean Series (Pirates of the Heart, Passages of Gold, Journey to the Crimson Sea.) That was followed by the Circle of Destiny Series by Tyndale (The Price, The Promise, The Treasure, The Quest.) Both are historicals. Then Barbour published the Stories from MacKenzie Street Series (The Unfolding, The Choosing, and Scattered Stones (coming in 2009) which are contemporary.

KS: What’s the most important thing to know when you start trying to collaborate on writing a book?

TK: The blessing in it has been that we have very complementary skills. That's important to consider at the outset. I would say that's it's the most critical factor in a working partnership: to really KNOW THYSELF and be honest about where you excel/don't excel. It also minimizes conflict because you learn to value and rely on the partner for what he/she brings to the collaboration. For example, if both of you were great with dialog, and neither were good at plotting, then you may have a weak story but overkill (and conflict) on the verbal exchanges. In our partnership, I'm research/detail-oriented, and Jim is speedier and more "big-picture." So it's worked well. You break up the tasks by who is better at them.

KS: However, in 2008 and earlier this year, you’ve released books, written on your own, in a new series, right?

TK: As I’ve traveled internationally and visited many of the places I’ve studied independently and in the course of my education in design, I’ve become even more passionate about restoration. (I’m the woman you might see sitting on a bench along the wall of the Sistine Chapel, silently weeping as I take in Michelangelo’s magnificent masterpiece in the simplicity of that sacred space.) I can talk forever about the importance of preserving buildings that are testaments to the creative impulse, the hours of painstaking effort, the motivation and dedication of artists, designers, craftsmen and artisans from previous eras. All were, no doubt, imperfect people—but people used as instruments in God’s hands to create perfectly rendered works of art that endure and can stir our hearts so many, many years later.

I love the metaphor of restoration, which is why I came up with the idea for the Project Restoration series—stories that would follow both the physical restoration of a building and emotional/spiritual restoration of a character. Book One in the series, The Renovation, was released last year - 2008, Book Two, The Renewal was released earlier this year and Book Three, The Transformation is to be released in a few months.

KS: With the economy and the housing market, this series is a perfect fit for our times. Have changes in those situations changed your marketing strategy or the direction of your series in any way?

TK: Not really. The books were planned before the recent dramatic downturn in the housing industry. I think people will be all the more interested in renovation right now, since many are finding the need to stay put and redo the homes they’re in rather than moving.

KS: What do you like to do when you’re not writing?

TK: I love to study the Bible, lead neighborhood Bible studies and help women grow in their faith.I love to listen to music—all types, from classical to contemporary.

I love to cook and bake. I like to joke about having “worked” with the best chefs in America…while I’m making a meal, I watch the Food Network on my kitchen TV, and cook alongside them! I love to experiment with tweaking existing recipes and creating new ones. Being 100% Italian, I’m mainly interested in the cuisine of Italy, varying greatly from province to province. I learned from two amazing northern Italian cooks—my mother and grandmother. I particularly enjoy finding new combinations of flavors for pasta dishes that work together and enhance each other—a little of this and a lot of that (which is usually garlic). I delight in seeing how my resident guinea pigs—my husband and son—rate my creations.

It’s a lot like writing a book. You start with a basic idea, composed of a few novel structural elements (the simple sauce made with the freshest ingredients) then flesh it out with some spunky characters, like you add just the right amounts of seasonings and spices), around which you design plot surprises (the new twists in the recipe) and bathe it all in romance (find the perfect blending of flavors) to tantalize your readers. It’s a lot like adding layers of flavors to a dish to wow the taste buds. I love to write historical fiction—books set in the framework of a past era. Likewise, it’s fun to use family recipes from Mom and Nonna when I cook as the springboard for a new culinary delight.

The joy comes when the reader, like the diner, dig into my work and—hopefully —come away not just satisfied, but having had a sumptuously memorable experience.

KS: From writing books, to cooking, to travel - family seems to play a big role in your life. It even seems to play a part in the topic of your Project Restoration books. What else about the topic drew you?

TK: Writing a novel set in the world of the restoration of old buildings has always been a dream of mine. The idea of renovation is in my family’s blood. I’m an interior design professional. My brothers are rehabbers. My husband, Jim, and I have survived the renovation of three houses.

I know well the upheaval, the despair of having no control, the agonizing over style decisions, the budget constraints, the disagreements between contractor and owner, and the emotional rollercoaster of unexpected problems and unanticipated gifts along the way. Together my clients and I have accepted big disappointments, celebrated tiny successes, and experienced the inexpressible elation at seeing what was once in ruins—old, broken, useless—become, with all its quirks, a beautiful, completely renewed, and usable place for people to share life again. Looking back on all those projects, I can echo the sentiment in the opening line of Dickens’ A Tale of Two Cities: “It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.”

All my books have a message of the hope that is found only in Christ, and are anchored in the Truth of the Gospel. They are written around themes such as forgiveness, new beginnings, grace, etc. Perhaps in one of these three books my readers will find a character who mirrors their own life, defining an area where they struggle, and which will point them toward the an kind of restoration you they long for. After all, we all are in need of healing. God is in the business of restoring lives— reclaiming, repairing, renewing what was broken and bringing beauty from ashes. The light of his love shines on all those dark places deep within us, exposing what needs his healing touch. This is the type of restoration I’ve become passionate about too, and what I’m writing about.

I want my readers to ask themselves, “What event in my past do I need to let go of?” It is my hope and prayer that they, too, will experience the renovation that awaits them through saying “Yes” to God’s invitation of heart restoration…and the life-transforming joy that will follow.

KS: So, back to working with your husband. What’s the best and worst of writing ten books and renovating three houses with your spouse?

TK: Best part of writing books---the synergy of working together, someone with whom you can discuss ideas, who really "gets" you, who can be your best critic, who provides support and inspiration. The worst? Nothing I can think of.

As for renovating houses, the best is it takes a team to get through all the upheaval. I can't imagine having to go through it alone! The worst is when my perfectionist tendencies sometimes will not be in sync with Jim's desire to avoid conflict.

KS: I’m so impressed with everything you do. How do you keep your sanity with so many interests and so many different directions to potentially run in?

TK: I’m getting better at creating boundaries and exercising my “NO” muscle. I’m learning the spiritual disciplines of contemplation and silence. Also hobbies—travel, reading, music, photography, knitting and quilting—are relaxing and renewing.

KS: Before we let you go back to those fun and creative hobbies, tell us what you are currently writing.

TK: My work in progress is historical, about an Italian-American young woman in the 1930’s and 40’s, in which I draw on many elements from my Italian heritage. It’s set mainly in Italy, so I will use what I have seen and learned in my travels there. I’m really excited about it, and hope a publisher will be, too.

KS: I hope so, too! Thanks, Terri, for letting us in on your energetic life and experiences in writing, cooking, renovating, and traveling.


Kay Dew Shostak lives in Marietta, Georgia in a soon-to-be empty nest. After years of newspaper reporting and editing, she’s left the real world and trying to break into the real, real world of fiction writing.

Kay has three stories in the compilation books Heart of a Mother, Heart of a Teacher, and Embrace of a Father.








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Friday, May 29, 2009

Plotting Your Novel Course Starts Monday

Last chance to register for this extensive course that starts Monday, June 1st.

Plot Shots: Plotting Your Novel in 12 Easy Snapshots is an online course taught by multi-published author Janice Thompson. The online course lasts eight weeks, is taught by weekly e-mail lessons.

Every story needs a beginning, middle, and an end. Careful plotting will lead the reader on a satisfactory, realistic journey through each of those stages, creatively weaving in and out, up and down.

But how do we begin to plot our stories? Is there a magic formula?

There are many ways to “start plotting.” How you begin will depend on your personal preference/style. Some work off an outline. Others use Randy Ingermanson’s “Snowflake Method.” Others use the storyboard method.

In this exciting course by multi-published author Janice Thompson, you will learn to use a 12-step plotter, which focuses on plotting your novel in 12 easy "snapshots."

Instructor: Janice Thompson
Course Dates: June 1, 2009 - July 24, 2009
Cost: $150

A wide variety of courses (4-, 6-, and 8-week) are offered year-round through WIES Workshops. We've recently added a course for Writing Women's Fiction, taught by Deborah Raney, and a writing course specifically for young authors, taught by Susan Marlow.

Check the schedule regularly for course descriptions, instructor bios, and updates.



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PUGS Pointers #26: Subject and Verb Must Agree

PUGS* Pointers
(*Punctuation, Usage, Grammar, and Spelling)
by Kathy Ide


In this column, freelance author, editor, and speaker Kathy Ide shares tips on Punctuation, Usage, Grammar, and Spelling (“PUGS”).


PUNCTUATION TIP
Letters as Letters
Italicize individual letters of the alphabet (unless used in a common expression). Examples:
the letter s
a capital M
He signed the paperwork with an X.
Mississippi is spelled with four i’s and four s’s.
Mind your p’s and q’s
Dot the i’s and cross the t’s


See The Chicago Manual of Style (15th edition) #7.63.


USAGE TIP

coarse/course
coarse (adjective): not fine
“coarse cloth” “coarse language”

course (noun): a path, a customary procedure, or part of a meal
“in due course” “of course”
“collision course” “correspondence course” “golf course”
course (verb): to pursue or move swiftly
“Airplanes coursed across the sky above her apartment every day.”
“Hot blood coursed through Brenda’s veins as she wrote her suspense novel.”



GRAMMAR TIP

Subject/Verb Agreement
Make sure the subject and the verb agree in number (singular or plural).
“The synopsis and sample chapter (two things) have to be mailed by Tuesday.”
“Each proposal (singular) has to be mailed separately.”
“Every contest entry (singular) has to be received before the deadline.”
“None (not one, singular) of the stories in that book is written in present tense.”

When a subject is followed by a phrase that refers to another entity (with or without commas), the added phrase does not change the quantity of the original subject.
“Terry’s bad grammar, as well as her typos, needs to be corrected.”
“The suspenseful plot combined with unexpected twists makes this a great book.”

Some collective nouns can be treated as either plural or singular, depending on whether you want the focus to be on the unit or on the individual members.
“The couple has a young daughter.” (refers to the two people as a single unit)
“The couple get along well together.” (focus is on two individuals, plural “they”)
“My family is very close.” (focus is on the unit, which is singular)
“My family want the best for me.” (reference is to several people, plural “they”)



SPELLING TIP

freelance/freelancer/freelancing (no hyphen)




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PUGS Pointers are based on the current industry-standard references in the United States.

For books:
The Chicago Manual of Style (15th edition, © 2003)
Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary (11th edition, © 2003)

For articles:
The Associated Press Stylebook (© 2004)
Webster’s New World College Dictionary (© 2002)

Many publishing houses have their own in-house style guides that may differ in some aspects from the standard references. However, unless you’re writing exclusively for one particular publisher, it’s best to follow the standard references and let the in-house proofreaders adjust to house style.

For more PUGS Pointers, see Kathy Ide’s Web site: www.KathyIde.com. Or get her book Polishing the PUGS, available at www.kathyide.com/published.php.


AUTHOR BIO:


Kathy Ide has been writing for publication since 1988. She has written books, articles, play and movie scripts, short stories, devotionals, and curriculum. She is a full-time freelance editor, offering a full range of editorial services for aspiring writers, established authors, commercial book publishers, subsidy publishers, and magazines. Her services include proofreading, copyediting, substantive/content editing, coauthoring, ghostwriting, and mentoring/coaching. She also speaks at writers conferences across the country. She is the founder and coordinator of The Christian PEN: Proofreaders and Editors Network (www.TheChristianPEN.com) and the Christian Editor Network (www.ChristianEditor.com). To find out more, please visit www.KathyIde.com.





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